Critique/Edit of Humanborn  — Helping You Make Your Story Great

The sun sank below the horizon. (You gotta come up with a stronger hook. If you only had one chance at snagging a reader, how would you write your first line?) Clouds rolled overhead, darkening the land underneath it. Thunder boomed in the distance, like the sound of a thousand horses running through the sky. The […]

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